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Reviewer: TRP-Goober Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2019 9:35 PM Title: Like Diamond

How disappointing. So Kirk and Mitchell stop in the snow to make out and Spock hears them? Great way for him to lose respect for Kirk! Mitchell is a total jerk. Kirk comes across as such too, in this situation!  

dare you to write the next part....like how does Spock approach the two Love Birds who ate his Superiors, next?  I can not imagine Spock wanting to play Chess with Kirk in the near future, or Mitchell "permitting it", as you clearly have Gar in the dominate position here.

in one sense, you have created an interesting quandary...as I always figured there had to be some event prior to the Episode before the Barrier, that Kirk had to finally Exert his Captain Authority over Mitchell, ticking off the guy and making him resentful....your story sets up that foundation. I think that situation involved Spock.  

did it take place on this Planet?...

Reviewer: TRP-Goober Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2019 6:57 PM Title: Like Diamond

How disappointing. So Kirk and Mitchell stop in the snow to make out and Spock hears them? Great way for him to lose respect for Kirk! Mitchell is a total jerk. Kirk comes across as such too, in this situation!  

dare you to write the next part....like how does Spock approach the two Love Birds who ate his Superiors, next?  I can not imagine Spock wanting to play Chess with Kirk in the near future, or Mitchell "permitting it", as you clearly have Gar in the dominate position here.

in one sense, you have created an interesting quandary...as I always figured there had to be some event prior to the Episode before the Barrier, that Kirk had to finally Exert his Captain Authority over Mitchell, ticking off the guy and making him resentful....your story sets up that foundation. I think that situation involved Spock.  

did it take place on this Planet?...

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2016 7:04 AM Title: Like Diamond

I love the way that this fic is put together. Pivoting in that painful last line which destroys Spock's innocence and captures his response to the knowledge. But is it a twist of jealousy or anger at Mitchell's betrayal and the realisation that he has been used.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2011 10:26 PM Title: Like Diamond

Oh...ouch. Sad.

But, as always, well done.



Author's Response:

Huh, I don't think of this one as sad, since it's so early in their mutual story.  Still, I'm glad it reached you--thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2011 4:29 PM Title: Like Diamond

Fascinating storya292;full of subtle temptation.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 7:53 AM Title: Like Diamond

Thanks for posting this here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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