Date: 10/12/2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
:-) I'd guessed that you'd be warming Spock with some Kirk-generated heat next. I'll head over and read the third story in a moment. In the meantime, here's hoping the muse doesn't try to evade your posse too hard or too long.
Date: 10/12/2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
A lovely sequel to 'In the Rain.' I look forward to the third story in this trilogy. Here's hoping that your muse will be more accomodating after that, so you may finish your long stories soon, too.
Third story is now up, called In the Heat. A posse has been sent out after my muse.
Date: 10/12/2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
You know something? All we assume that Spock found peace after a while and that meditation helped, but we forget that is part human and that part is very sensitive. How to heal if he do not have a proper duel?
I'm glad to he has Jim to his side, he may be able to give peace to his tormented soul.
Wonderful, I'm hoping the third chap^ ^
Date: 10/12/2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story so much I wonder if you could do another sequel to it maybe a little longer. In that one maybe you can show how their relationship progress from this point on. I see it as being the beginning of the complete trust between them as well as the friendship that will develop into the ultimate love between them.
Yes, there will be a third story; I'm working on it now. Glad you liked this one.
Date: 10/11/2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
(sigh) That was a perfect :) I was so excited when I read this would probably be a trilogy^^ I think after this episode Spock will let Jim in more, and their friendship will grow. Very much looking forward to the third part^^
TY. Yes, in the final story, Jim will achieve his objective regarding Spock.
Date: 10/11/2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way that you have written Scotty, watching out for our guy's on the periphery in a totally pragmatic engineer sort of way.
I also like the way you ahve captured Kirk as the maturing young captain rather than the immature individual that he has been categorised as. This is obviously a captain that one would respect
Yeah, I thought for once it would be a good idea to show Jim stepping up to the plate and maturing as a leader and friend. And yes, Scotty watches over everything carefully. Thanks.
Date: 10/11/2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I'm feeling rather fortunate, even if your muse is misbehaving - I loved "In the Rain" and I love this one too. The whole freezing away the memories reminds me of one of my less healthy coping mechanisms - interesting. Beautiful piece and I can't wait for the final part.
TYVM. *&^%$ muse. But I'm glad you liked the story.