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Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

the enterprise is a pissed at the wait as we are - makes perfect sense to me :)

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I crave a wound
So you would hold me soon
I crave a bruise
So that you would kiss that too
I crave a sparr
But not to marr
Only to be locked in your embrace
Is it not written on my face

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Funny how they just HAPPEN to bump into each other whenever the ship lurches from side to side...  It seems that the universe knows, and the Enterprise conspires!

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yep, even the universe knows.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

My dear Dahliaxat - I regret to inform you that an agent of that most feared species 'the stray apostrophe' has infiltrated the third from last line of your poem...

But seriously, it's so true!  Have you seen that 'physics doesn't ship Spock/Uhura' demotivational?  This poem reminded me of that.  :)   Physics does ship Kirk/Spock, it appears...



Author's Response: I believe the ship, ships them my dear Tydomin....and thanks for that stray apostrophe...I often make that mistake...darn it.

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