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Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

(Eyes full of tears)

It was intoxicating from emotions

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a nice piece, but you really need a proofreader to smooth out the bumps. BTW, it's 'palate,' not 'pallet.'

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