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Reviewer: TRP-Goober Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2019 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know all of you SLASH writers like writing the Sex scenes parts, but I think, actual Sexual Attraction, The actual Sexual Tension and "heat" between .kirk and Spock happens in the non-sex scenes, those Gentle, Loving Moments....sort of like in the Rec Room, when Kirk was trying to draw Spock out, his trying to settle his concerns for if Spock was trying to purposely die, would he try again....all the hand touching, Spock admitting he could never remove his t'hy'la from his mind...(heart)?  Also....cute scene in Elevator with the Blood Lilies!   Anyway, I guess I enjoy more Ramance than the out and out sex acts.

Author's Response:

With all due respect, you're wrong to lump all writers of slash together in this way, and to assume that we all like writing the sex scenes.

I thank you for the compliments you have given me here, but must point out that a story with an NC-17 rating, which this one has, pretty much guarantees at least one explicit sex scene. If you don't like those, you might want to consider moving on to another story with a maximum rating of R instead of deprecating the slash genre and/or the author(s) who choose to write in it.

Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

C'est si bon!

Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup! Vous êtes tres gentil. Je parle français un petit peu, mais pas couramment. Ainsi, il me faut écrire en anglais.

I'm so glad you liked this story! It's one of my favorites (of the ones I've written), mostly because Caren's picture is so perfect. I was most honored when she gave me permission to write a story based on it. Thank you so much for commenting!



Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

(Breathes deeply) My heart feels heavy at the end of the reading.
It's feal so unfair:
Spock leaves and then returns to Jim how receives him not angry for leaving him for what supposed to make him forget his feelings.

Reviewer: murt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this ; loved Kirk 's doubt at the end - I thought that was very appropriate for the characters.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm very grateful for your remark about Kirk's doubt, and am glad that you found it believable.

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  This is really good.  Touching.  I checked out the pic and I can see how it would inspire you to write.  Both are excellent.  I think you covered some ground that I've always questioned in the first movie after I became a slash fan.  Thank you so much for writing this.  It was great.

Author's Response:

You're very welcome! Isn't Caren's picture wonderful? It's the one that made me pluck up the courage to ask her permission to write stories about her work, and she was incredibly nice about it.

The movie raised a lot of questions for me, as well. It's an incredibly fertile ground for exploring these characters, imho. I'm glad if I covered ground that resonated with you, too. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story!


Reviewer: Jules Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cried reading this. It is beautiful and so much more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it! I'm glad you liked it so much. :)

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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