Date: 08/23/2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this a lot! It has humour and a nice pace. I find it logical, lol, to consider Spock to have a hands fetish, and to have it expressed this way.
The popped knuckles! though I did it a lot in my young..er days, I think its not good for them fingers, hehe It was fun to see Spock's reaction to that.
Thanks for sharing!
<tries to whistle by using fingers in mouth... > rats...
Date: 08/22/2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Expressions of love and effection don't have to be big. They only have to be seen as expressions to the receipant party. All stories don't have to be wildly passionate, extremely violent or emotional. Your 5 parter has given an insight to the minds of both men. My favorite thou is the restaurant. Well done.