[Report This]Date: 07/09/2016 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful! Really beautiful. :)
Date: 04/05/2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is erotica as it should be written pithy short and how I would love to be able to write
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jim is from Missoura?!! I thought he was from Iowa. Heehee! Love it! There's a story I read on Livejournal that addresses how overwhelming telepathic sex can be the first time but it is from Spock's POV. He says something like, "You are more intoxicating than I anticipated" and if memory serves (which it usually doesn't), Jim responded by addressing the 'anticipated' part of the statement....something like "you've been thinking about me/us like this?" Uber flaming hotness! Just like this story, Thanks!
Date: 08/14/2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Righteous indignation) "Now you dare to stop the story - not acceptable!"
With a headline like that, I was sure something was going to ruin them (something like an interstellar attack or bones came in "surprisingly "...)
But because one of these lovely characters is all mind, I could see it coming.
Do not worry, it did not detract from the pleasure of this erotic experience (wink)
Date: 08/13/2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was hot and sweet at the same time. Very nicely done.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, well, well I really like this. First time sex between my two favourite space travellers. Nice touches throughout. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is this going to be all there FIRST TIME'S . Well this chapter was great waiting to Help Enjoy all of there other First as well. XOXOXOXOXOX