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Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a nice look into the events between TMP and TWOK.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww :)

Really beautiful, my friend.  This is so tender and intimate, and I can completely imagine Kirk and Spock saying those things and thinking them.  You've captured them and their relationship absolutely!

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow, this was really good.  I was enthralled with the agony of waiting to see if Jim got a commission too.  I never have really thought about the change between TMP and TWOK.  Jim's an admiral, Spock's a captain, wow you explained it so well!  Everything seems so good, and yet Jim is thinking he's about to become "old".  I loved Spock's response.  Your writing is excellent and you really captured the characters.  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: TLara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story. You captured their thoughts and feelings so well, I could really see them both in my mind! Thx for a great read!

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