Date: 08/09/2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this was really good. I was enthralled with the agony of waiting to see if Jim got a commission too. I never have really thought about the change between TMP and TWOK. Jim's an admiral, Spock's a captain, wow you explained it so well! Everything seems so good, and yet Jim is thinking he's about to become "old". I loved Spock's response. Your writing is excellent and you really captured the characters. Thank you so much!
Date: 08/09/2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. You captured their thoughts and feelings so well, I could really see them both in my mind! Thx for a great read!