Date: 08/10/2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was good! I liked the idea of Jim and Spock through the cadets' eyes. I would have been the girl with the schoolgirl crush on Spock. That amused me. There's always one in the crowd willing to reduce it to nothing but sex, but we know better with our guys. I'm taking it the ending was Spock going through pon farr? It was a really good piece, I only wish it went on further. Great job!
Date: 08/09/2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
He he! This was funny. I love the way you told it from the students' perspective and fleshed out the characters. I've always maintained that Kirk and Spock were legal it was no secret that they were married, but this was great read and it was interesting to read about another point of view. Cute!