Date: 07/18/2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh. *big sigh*
This was great. It was so... tender, and gentle... I particularly liked the interactions between Spock and Amanda - there aren't many stories with them interacting as mother and son in a normal, domestic setting and it was a joy to read... I really got a sense of their love for each other, but also their vulcanness.
Actually, all of the characters and conversations were perfect! And I laughed at McCoy's line about Spock melding with Vejur, seemingly out of the blue - that's what I always thought...
Thanks for this - it's excellent and I really enjoyed reading it!
Date: 07/18/2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was glued to every word..loved this so much...you have them all spot on...I liked how you made Jim not trust Spock at the beginning..because he was hurt and he didn't want to go through that again. THANKS FOR SHARING..