Date: 07/20/2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
excellent! Usually I read stories in which it is Spock who is withdrawing.... but this one was different.
I can actually see this one happening. Kirk is always upset when He loses a crewmember. He tends to blame himself. Even though it is not the case.
However, I do see Spock helping Kirk with the grief. He did so in the episodes in his own little way.
Keep it up.
Enjoyed the read very much
Date: 07/17/2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this very much. Jim loves his Enterprise..but he loves Spock also...At least he has the touch, the embrace of flesh and blood. I am sure it helps him heal from the death that greets him at any moment.
Spock is a patient man..he knows Jim loves him and his ship. Sharing this love at the moment is all they have. Well done..