Date: 12/05/2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
it Was a little difficult at first to understand Which "Spirk" in Which world I was read, but gradually i recognize even without reference to Jim's eye color or spock mother.
The love scene was full of emotion and really blew me away.
My only disappointment was that we have'nt such a scene with the other couple and they/we will have to wait a long time to be there.
Conclusion, It was undoubtedly an unbelievable story!
Date: 06/27/2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, THIS WAS AND IS SO AMAZING. I JUST LOVE HOW YOU PLAYED IT . I WAS THINKING I WAS GOING NUTS READING THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS. REALLY CLEVER HOW YOU DID THAT I NEVER SAW IT COMING . I THOUGH I WAS PRETTY QUICK ON THE PLOT ON MOST OF MY STORY'S BUT I ENJOY IT SO MUCH BETTER WHEN I AM SURPRISED BY A GREAT PLOT AND STORY. MY HATS OFF TO YOU . THANK YOU. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO