Date: 06/04/2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
great story capturing the Jim Kirk who came through Tarsus IV with hsi belief in what mattered intact. The Kirk who knows his crew as individuals
I hoped it would come across like that. That Jim would understand that family is important even if they're not always easy to deal with, and that what his family's gone through isn't exactly normal and shouldn't be used as an example of how other families interact. And, of course, what you said about seeing his crew as individuals, seeing their individual needs and responsibilities. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/04/2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
WELL IT WAS STILL VERY SWEET AND I LIKE SPOCKS AND BONES LITTLE FAMILY CHAT. IT BRINGS THEM CLOSER TOO. VERY NICE STORY, XOXOXOXOXO
Thanks! Some people seem to want me to expand on it a bit, so I may be doing that eventually.
Date: 06/04/2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like what there is of it, but I really would have loved you to continue it and add Jim's return, with Spock showing what he'd learned.
You're not the first person to say that to me, and I'm seriously considering it. I may have to wait a while I work on other stories, but I just might come back to it sometime, at least to do Jim's POV, maybe a little more. Thank's for reading!