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Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so brilliant and fun - it's almost like a song!

Author's Response:

Thanks Nell. It could be couldn't

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2012 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh no, a badboy in leather!
I almost wish Spock would tease with a "never"
But I think Jim plus chocolate
Overrides it
And ends up with them together

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, yes, I want to bad

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.... Like the poem.  Like the pic.



Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is very naugthy! I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, so glad you liked it. I tell you Ivy, you are gonna have an attack when you come across some very erotic poems that I have written, with the images. But, maybe you are not into

Reviewer: Emogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Effing awsome! haha

Reviewer: Mirrorgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow wee wow, D, you are a naughty girl. Love this.

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Naughty girl

Reviewer: Spockaholic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad my husband wasn't around when I was reading this poem...I seriously would have freaked him out by how hard I was laughing at that "Come on baby, squeeze that tube" line :D  Love the poem, and the photo is gorgeous.  You are all kinds of awesome for posting this.

Author's Response: Thanks my dear...I love when people appreciate what I do..puts a smile on my face....

Reviewer: CarniVulcan Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dayum. :D

Reviewer: TLara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously hot! Love this one. Would be a great song (and great vid, too)!!

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