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Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bittersweet yet Lovely x

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh.... so sad.....

Reviewer: Spock_IMM Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

*Chokes up* Loved it... simple as that.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

He asks forgiveness from a sin he cannot name
He chooses to die than speak and share the blame
An endless ache
That leaves only pain in its wake
He is left to rot
With the plea, "I cannot"

Reviewer: Emogirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww :3 Freaking adorable!! I love how it flows! Greaaattt work my friend!

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2011 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

So what's up Spock?  Is it pon farr?  Don't lock yourself up in a room to die...  Jim will help you...

This sounds so like Spock - you've got his voice completely spot on and it's ever so moving in its non-emotionalness (if that's even a word...)

Our poor Spock-baby!  *cries*

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well that just suck's. Damn that Valcan Pride. xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response: Thank you so much....

Reviewer: RinRin68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the last line. this is written wonderfully.

Author's Response: Your kind words have made my day...thanks so much..I truly needed this now...

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