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Reviewer: Elizadolots Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 5:01 AM Title: Dilemma

Ahh....beauty has returned!!! Thank you.

Reviewer: Elizadolots Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 4:43 AM Title: The Decision

Wow....chapter one is brilliant. I love it...chapter 2, not so much. I understand you had to deal with the Uhura thing, so I guess ugliness had to happen.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 8:28 AM Title: Destiny

Or you lose that vital piece of a story climax and the muse never gets it right second time round....

Your reasoning is sound.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 6:19 PM Title: Destiny

I know what you mean.  You tidy up then gradually the desk and drawers of said desk disappear under a mountain of paper.  What ever happened to the paperless society they promised.  Great chapter and wonderful get together.  Please do an epilogue with the marriage on Vulcan.  

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Date: 06/10/2011 3:02 PM Title: Destiny

A verrrry nice story! Thanks for a good read!

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Date: 06/09/2011 7:47 PM Title: Dilemma

Love it ..this is so much fun...and I can see it happening right before my eyes...ah so cute...love your Bones...he`s so spot on...

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Date: 06/09/2011 3:16 AM Title: Misinterpretations

Great job...loving this alot...poor Spock..looking forward to the next chapter...

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Date: 06/09/2011 2:50 AM Title: The Decision

Really like this...and so true the smile Spock had when he entered the bridge..It was so directed to Jim..no one else...I do believe a lot had to do with Spock Prime.....and poor Uhura...nuf said about her.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2011 7:39 PM Title: Just Chess

Now all we need is a reveal of feelings.

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Date: 06/08/2011 1:53 AM Title: Aftermath

So I'm sitting here, a little confused because it's wayyyyy late at night and I'm not thinking all that clearly.  Is this going to continue?  I mean beyond chapter 3?  I would like it to.  I know, it's such a huge effort for the author, so if you're letting it stop here I understand.  I've just enjoyed the three chapters and wouldn't mind seeing more.  You've piqued my interest and my curiosity (what did the original message from Kirk say as it was written?).  You did a wonderful job on these chapters.  Thanks for posting them.



Author's Response:

This will continue until they get together, worry not. :)

Reviewer: Alistair Malfoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2011 11:56 PM Title: Aftermath

I'm glad that you continue this. I always enjoy your stories (although this is the first time I review ... sorry). Is Uhura going to be an antagonist in this story? It'll be interesting to see what Spock's going to do.

Reviewer: girl_amphibian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2011 12:20 AM Title: The Message

Well YES. Yes you do need to continue onward. Only ~20% of the story has been explored here, and I think that's a crime.

Please?

Reviewer: Vulcan Pearl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2011 1:17 PM Title: The Message

I was wondering if anyone would do a story about that unfilmed scene!  Though, I don't know what the message would have been.  I can only imagine you changed it by adding all the 'I love you' stuff.  I kind of had an idea for something like that, only mine was that it would be a last message sort of thing, though in a way, I guess yours was too.

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