Date: 06/19/2011 5:42 PM Title: I Like Him, I Like Him Not
I am also enjoying this story. You are giving us such a rich background of events...that has happened in some form or another. Mentioning M'Benga, T'Pol's aversion to Human's scent..Sorry never heard of Wishbone but still this is such a cozy story and it makes me excited to see what will happen next....thanks for sharing...
I want to try to connect this in some ways to the original series. I guess in the new movie they just wanted to bring together most of the really regular characters or something. And yeah, I like it when something connects one movie or show to another! As for Wishbone, that was just a show about literature that I was crazy about as a kid. Since Jim's a reader, I thought it kind of fit. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/05/2011 8:24 AM Title: I Like Him, I Like Him Not
Excellent job...I really like the fact you use many things that are fact in the original series. The animated series for one. and the mention of Jim's brother and his wife.
Can't wait til u update
I'm glad to see the TAS bits were enjoyed. I don't know many people who know a lot about the various Star Trek series. I didn't even know that much until after I saw the 2009 movie, and compared to what all is out there, I still don't. But I thought the part about Spock having to have his pet put down would be a good personal detail that would help bring them closer right away. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/31/2011 8:42 PM Title: I Like Him, I Like Him Not
This just grabbed me from the start..way to go...You write very well..Yes, the baby thing was sad. But life isn't always a bowl of cherries...Looking forward to more....
Hopefully what follows in the next couple chapters will continue to intrigue you. I still can't believe I wrote about someone killing a baby. Even if it wasn't real, even in the story, it's still a little depressing.
Thank you for your review!