Reviews For Anticipation
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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I lie in bed dreaming of you
My body twists, my legs pose too
I can almost feel your hands on me
My eyes close, I feel so free
Suddenly heat is on my skin
I laugh as you make the lights dim
And I can't wait for the fun to begin

Author's Response:

I just adore your rhymes...thanks for reading and adding more to it.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's so mushy and adorable, as well as sensuous and passionate...  Nice!

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