Date: 01/12/2020 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute, I love it!
This really made me smile, thank you for making my day a little happier!
May I have your permission to translate this into Russian? Of course I will mention you as the author and link back to the original work.
Date: 07/19/2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
HA! Uhura and Spock teaming up is always beautiful, scary as hell, but effective and just funny when you think off all the poor crew scrambling to get out of the way of their combined path. The Admiralty is a kind of abstract idea to me. Every writer writes them slightly different, and I've only seen the new movies (voyager doesn't really count in this case as being lost in the delta quadrant isn't conductive to talking to one's superiors) so my opinion of them is kind of limited to Pike (who I love/adore/feel is underutalised because he just has so much potential...and now he's dead) and Nogura (who everyone hates- was he really that bad in tos?)
Date: 03/10/2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
The authors McCoy is amazing. Even when he is being quoted by someone else. lol
Once again, CMM brings everyone to life. I wonder if they have moved into the author's digs and can not be pried out? That would explain how accurate the voices are. If they are taking up space in your living room and cluttering up your bathroom, insanity is your only option unless you write all that impossibility down.
This is short, but sweet.
Date: 01/27/2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I read it for so many times and now I finaly write a review.....
A wonderful, great story. Thank you for sharing and i will laugh and feel and cry with Jim in the future, when i read it again.
"Was not aware that Jesus was lost?" it's so funny - and next sentence so dramatic because of the remarriage from Winnona and his stepfather....
Date: 05/15/2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww. I listened to this with a particular song playing on my computer, and the result was pure magic. Jim's having the worst week ever, and he's trying not to let anyone in on it. He's not even telling Bones, and daggone that means it's serious. At the end of his rope, Spock comes in and saves the day, in the most romantic way I could have ever imagined. He's really a prince about the whole ordeal. His solutions are nothing but loving. The part about blocking the wedding was good. However, I was in tears of laughter at the idea of Spock commenting "I was unaware that Jesus was lost." Oh, I rolled at that one. I probably shouldn't have, but I did. Spock's right, the whole crew loves Jim. One of them more than the rest. This is terrific and please know it will be re-read many times over. Thank you.
Very glad you liked it. Once i had finished it, I felt the whole thing was worthwhile if only for the "unaware that Jesus was lost" line. I can just HEAR Spock's voice, calm, a bit inquiring, the faintest hint of humor, as he says that line.
Date: 05/15/2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great as always. Was not aware that Jesus was lost? That was hilarious. Damn woman married the man again, that tortured her son. Wow. Unfortunately that kind of crap happens all the time. It's amazing how many so called mother's pick a man over there own flesh and blood. Good story. I agree sequel. Spock was awesome.
I'll be happy to write a sequel; I'm just not sure about the plot. Suggestions?
Date: 05/15/2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
“I was unaware that Jesus was lost” --indeed =D
This is wonderful and lovely and is making my day. Evening. Whatever.
'Snicker." The lapsed Baptist in me couldn't resist that line. Glad you liked the story.