Date: 06/01/2011 12:54 AM Title: Our Move
Oh boy. I read this chapter with great glee. I'm glad to know everyone we know is okay, and the little baby's name is Jamie Gaila? Perfect. I was also pleased to see how you've got the story line working out with the destruction of Vulcan and this Spock not seeing it. With everyone scattered to the four winds looking for Nero, he'd have no trouble sneaking in and destroying Earth. I hope everyone will be able to help! Great chapter.
Date: 05/31/2011 2:06 AM Title: New Piece
Ha! Spock and ... Spock, going after the same Jim, who has no earthly clue what's happening! I rolled with laughter, and I could just imagine the interaction between the two Vulcan men. And T'Pau sees it all. HA! But it is sad that Vulcan is gone and Solinar was forced to watch it. I think that pain would be difficult to share for anyone. So they're off to HQ, and meanwhile back at the hospital Pascha's okay but clueless about Vulcan and then -- hey, she was in love with Sybok? Interesting. I was sorry to hear of his demise. Truly sad. I wonder if Pascha is shutting out everyone like Amanda's fearing, or if she's just that dynamic a personality that she can take a blow and keep going? We'll find out. And speaking of finding out, Little Pike has a name! What is it? I'll be looking for your next chapter.
Date: 05/29/2011 4:28 PM Title: Missing a Piece
Okay, Jim's okay (growly Spock is hawt) and so is everyone else, with the exception of Finnegan. Missing a ball? Ouch! I'm glad everyone who matters is okay. I'm surprised Spock's still possessive around Gaila. He should know Jim is his and his alone. Now we get down to the Vulcan crisis. All they know is it was one ship that destroyed many. They know his name is Nero and they know he destroyed Vulcan, but it sounds like that's all they know. I hope they figure it out soon! Poor Spocks. Their planet is gone! I'll be waiting for your next chapter!
Date: 05/29/2011 4:08 PM Title: Challenge Averted
I really like the storyline of Pike and Nogura digging up dirt! People don't take advantage of the great secondary characters as much as the should! That said, perhaps Pascha could be toned down a bit on the "fangirl" persona? It seems a little too cliche-spunky rather than real-spunky. Other wise I love this story!
Date: 05/29/2011 1:35 PM Title: Missing a Piece
I love the way you've rewritten the story this way. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love the intro of T'Pau with Chris, that woman is so dam mysterious. I bet you old Spock has given her some information. Now the crap will hit the fan. Wonderfully done.
Date: 05/28/2011 2:31 AM Title: Gary in Check
Interesting. I approve whole heartedly. I was a bit confused about the events at Spock's house, from when Gary and the gang showed up, but I picked it up easily enough after that. I'm glad the baby is okay and Finnegan and Gary are out of it. Spock rescues Jim (yay!) and Leonard and Christine get there in time to clean up and check on everyone. The ending of the chapter was fascinating too. Spock from another time will always be Spock. Family knows family. Great work.
Date: 05/28/2011 2:22 AM Title: The Squeeze
Okay, so the Vulcan "Incident" (I can't stand it when it's called an indent. They lost a freaking planet. That's more than just an "incident") happens before Jim and Spock are on the ship? Or they're never on the ship? Interesting. I want to see where this is headed. Very interesting! On to the next chapter!