Date: 05/14/2011 10:49 AM Title: A Kick to the Edge of the Board
So I've read the first three chapters of this story and I'm very intrigued. It's going quite well. Jim is not the ignorant idiot Uhura wants to make him out to be, nor the drivelling slut Finnegan wants to portray him as. It seems only Spock gets Jim. By this point I'm sure even if the chess club folded Spock would find a way to be with Jim. I predict possible trouble, though. Jim's got a reputation to live down. Poor thing. I'm favoriting this one so I can follow along. Great job!
Date: 05/14/2011 7:10 AM Title: A Kick to the Edge of the Board
okay, now I want to kick Uhura's ass. maybe you should put her in a position where she learns that everything she ever heard about him isn't true at all, and have it be a situation where she really regrets her choice of words to him. throw in a little bit of humiliation for her too.
pretty please? :)