Date: 05/10/2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, hello and welcome back into the fiction world! I had to see where you were going with this, and while I don't see where it's going quite yet, I am sufficiently intrigued. Jim has finally admitted his feelings, but Spock's nowhere to be found. Will Jim get to take the chance and tell his friend how he feels? We'll have to wait and see. For someone who doesn't come and play on this side of the field that often, you're doing wonderful. Keep up the great work!
Date: 05/10/2011 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm, what will happen I wonder? Will Spock be injured when they find him, and have no clue about who or where he is? Maybe he will have forgotten all about his friendship with Kirk, or perhaps - God forbid - he will rethink his life and decide that he doesn't want to be in Starfleet after all (like McCoy in that novel 'Dreams of the Raven' by Carmen Carter). Intriguiging... I liked the simile about love being like a book - very poetic, and very McCoyish as well!