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Reviewer: Nocturne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

aww this is really sweet!

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh.  How lovely.  I like this; it shows how even though Kirk has been around the galaxy and is reputed to be an excellent lover lah de dah de dah, he doesn't really know anything about what counts - love.  How ironic then, that the one to teach him is Spock, whose lifelong ambition up until that point was to feel nothing at all.  Ironic, and beautiful.  Thank you for this!

Oh by the way, do you possible mean 'rigid control' rather than 'ridge control'?  And 'something that he hadn't even known he was seeking'?  That's really anal of me, I know... but seeing as you obviously take such care over your work, I thought it would be a shame to let a couple of typos lessen the impact.

best wishes, T x



Author's Response:

I'm glad that came through. :) Thanks.

 

And I don't mind at all. Thanks for pointing them out. :)

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