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Reviewer: sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2014 3:14 PM Title: And We're Off....

Hot. Also, I never liked the foot thing, but you got me interested in this one.

Reviewer: Ishtar205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2013 6:14 PM Title: And We're Off....

Was hooot !

Reviewer: Bedwench Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 12:07 PM Title: And We're Off....

That was unbelievably hot. The mirror idea is fantastic hope you do not mind if I nick that for a future story! I love the fact that Kirk had no idea what he started and that he got a whole lot more than he bargained for. Brilliant.

Reviewer: Hakka Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 7:02 AM Title: And We're Off....

Unfortunately I didn't enjoy it as much as I could. The PWP had potential but what irked me was the constant sqitching between present and past tense, sometimes even in the same line. This PWP surely would have needed at least te re-read I fear it didn't get, or you would have noticed this biggest problem.

Believe me, I say this not wishing to hurt you or what. I do understand the issue of switching from a verbal time (is it it's name in English?) to another, as I kept doing that back in school, during compositions. :)

Reviewer: unseensorrows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2012 7:20 PM Title: And We're Off....

Pretty sure this is some of the BEST smut I've ever read!

Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 5:28 AM Title: And We're Off....

Holy crap! Hot to the level of ridiculousness!

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 3:52 PM Title: And We're Off....

holy hells bells, i loved it! more please!!

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 2:31 PM Title: And We're Off....

My, my, my you naughty monkey. Oh yeah.

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 2:49 AM Title: And We're Off....

OMFG, THAT WAS SO NASTY AND HOT. REALLY THERE ARE NO WORDS TO TELL YOU HOW WONDERFUL THIS IS. JUST THANK YOU . XOXOXXOXOXO

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