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Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really cute. I like a self-sacrificing Jim.

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWWWW. And written on a pink Barbie laptop to boot!

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was cute!  I remain ignorant to the crossovers you mentioned so I didn't see where they were, but whatever they are they fit perfectly.  I read it as just a Star Trek fic and it worked great!  I thought it was hilarious how something always seemed to interrupt Jim and Spock, and how Jim always backed out.  Spock seemed disappointed and angry that he did so, but Jim never noticed.  The end was great, where Spock pulls him into the room and they kiss.  I really enjoyed this story, thanks so much for posting it!



Author's Response: Sorry there was no crossover. I must have accidentally pressed it. I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was adorable.  Jim was just getting more and more depressed, and Spock was just getting more and more frustrated.  Aww to the two of them, and yay to Spock for refusing to be distracted in the end.  Just say, "no," Spock.  Adorable story.  Great job! ~ RK

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