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Reviewer: GoldPawn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was such a cute and wonderful one-shot! It would e fun to see it drawn out over a few chapters with more suspense and hurt feelings with the clueless Spock!

Reviewer: Servatia83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh poor Jim for being so blind :)

I must commend you on your synapsis. You made me read an MPREG story and that's a first. My only point of ... not even criticism, rather bewilderment, is why you rated this NC-17.

So, yes, I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing ;)

Reviewer: nixishadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

"I did not tell you because I believed only Doctor McCoy's blunt honesty would get you to actually believe what had happened to you.”

^^^^^^

Love it.  Poor insecure, hormonal Kirk and Spock knowing what's going on and waiting for Bones to tell Kirk.  Hilarious.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very cute, love that Jim yelled at Bones at first!

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Jim didn't see what Spock was doing for him. Nice job.

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww!   This was adorable!  I could see how Jim came to the wrong conclusion, but I, already knowing Jim was pregnant, could understand all Spock's little changes.  What an attentive, loving, idiotic boyfriend!  He should have told Jim.  But alas, he's right, Jim wouldn't have believed him.  It had to have come from Bones, and even then it was hard to swallow.  I don't know the story behind this, but it makes sense to me.  Rule #1:  The transporters always malfunction in the worst possible way.  Rule #2:  It's ain't over til it's over.  There are so many MPREG stories out there, but yours is good.  Thanks for posting it (again!)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the great review.

I will always see Spock as be a bit of an oblivious boyfriend. Doing things to help Jim but causing Jim to get upset because he doesnt explain ANYTHING! I also see Jim as a little bit of a drama queen (like me) and taking every little thing to heart when he should really know better.

The funny thing is I have a 'transpoter turned them into girls' story nearly finished but it is not the prequel to this. I don't think there ever will be one. It will alsways be one of thse things mentioned but never explained in detail.

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice piece. You've still got one line in here from your beta, something aobut Spock telling Jim to calm down because Jim's crying too hard. Might want to remove that.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I dont know where my brain has gone lately.

All fixed.

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