Date: 04/16/2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I applaud you for taking the time to post this. It was beautiful, and I can get over the changes in POV. Heck, half the time in my writing my POVs don't make sense in the slightest, so good on you that you can figure it out in your writing! I liked Jim giving Spock the Claddagh. They're definitely both men of actions, not words, and this was an excellent way of saying "I love you." Thanks again for posting.
Thank you for your review. I wasn't sure if it goes alright with the other one, but I really wanted it done. Thanks for reading!