Reviews For Symbol
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Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done.

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

not a mistake at all!!  enjoyed the first one (dunno if I got round to *saying* so though -- Alzheimer's sucks! :) and enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok so I'm a sucker for symbolism--but this is really good.

And I work at a high-risk outpatient clinic...so the white ribbon is awesome to me as well.

Thank you!

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the story and the comparison perfect

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I applaud you for taking the time to post this.  It was beautiful, and I can get over the changes in POV.  Heck, half the time in my writing my POVs don't make sense in the slightest, so good on you that you can figure it out in your writing!  I liked Jim giving Spock the Claddagh.  They're definitely both men of actions, not words, and this was an excellent way of saying "I love you."  Thanks again for posting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I wasn't sure if it goes alright with the other one, but I really wanted it done.  Thanks for reading!

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