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Reviewer: Zzickle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story seems finished to me, but is listed as "Completed: No". If it is not finished, it should be in the Works in Progress category.

Reviewer: Emogirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: kokoroyume Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice way to continue 'All our yesterdays', I liked it :)

Thank you !

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this....I always thought that it was a bit quick for Spock to be back to his old self without any side effects....I really like possessive Spock..he's mine bitches stay away.........and him eating meat....yum....I also like the fact that you mention Jim having erections...that is absolutely true...not just the character mind you...Ahem Mr. Shatner had them often on the set....example episode Obsession...I even wrote a poem about it and have a wonderful screencap to prove it......

You used so many little instances that we are so use to seeing on the show and think to ourselves...yes....he did look at him that way..oh shit he did touch him that way.....example..just before leaving Sarpeidon's past..he did lay his hand on Spock's shoulder..very affectionately mind you..ok so he touched McCoy also but I don't think Bones would give Jim an erection.....

Rape scene was not fun for Jim....and at the end when he said just do it and get it over with you freak..that made me sad....I know what Spock was doing wasn't right..but for Jim to call him a freak...just made me sad..and then McCoy saves the day....

Ok now the romantic ending....just love it when they touch each other and just melts my heart....just the kissing part makes me just get lost in the moment....great when you have time write us another one.......please.....

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. I would have liked a little more angst on Spock's part at the end--he seems to calm down pretty quickly, considering he almost raped his captain. but still, good job.

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