Date: 01/25/2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
(Gasps) Wow, it was all so intense. so powerful and emotional.
Wow, I need a moment to calm down.
this is undoubtedly one of the stories I mention long.
You wrote a great story.
Have you thought to continue to write about them? What happens next? I would like to.
Date: 11/10/2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
I was hoping that...not the kiss...well, i was expecting it too, but i'm talking about someone interrumpting them! I was imaging this whole scene in my head with Saked caughting them and, well...all hell loose!
Thanks God that didn't happen...to much Romeo and Juliet.
Date: 01/24/2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
What a delicious story of teenage love! So well written and so full of life and love and light. I can't wait to see how their paths will take them eventually to the stars, to the Enterprise.
I particularly loved their juvenile dedication, the unfaltering faith in their love despite the difficulties of being worlds apart. They are so positive that nothing ever will be strong enough to impede their love, they are so refreshingly certain about one another.
There was only one moment towards the end that freaked me out: why on earth a teenage boy who is a virgin and whose lover is light years away keeps a tube of lube in his nightstand and how does he know about the tecniques of anal intercourse!!! But I don't love the story less for it ;-)