Reviews For Vigil
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Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2011 12:42 PM Title: None

I'm very finicky when it comes to poetry--but this is just beautiful.

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Thanks so much for your feedback - I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :-)

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2009 4:31 AM Title: None

Ahhh... very nice.  Captures the desperation -- and the hope.

Reviewer: jesmihr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2008 1:43 PM Title: None

I really like this poem. The "everything is less than nothing" line and the description of the two of them as the "instigator of miracles" were, I thought, especially effective. I also love the way you intertwined the two separate lines of thought - it gave the poem a slightly desperate tone that was very suitable to its content.

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