Date: 03/02/2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was crying from the end of the third paragraph all the way through. I just wanted to punch NuSpock so bad. But then again I know what Khan had done and was hoping that Spock prime would tell them to just destroy the Botany bay. I never thought of the consequneses though and now I did with this and it broke my heart and had me crying. And I wanted so bad for Young Spock to just understand, to believe him but it didnt happen.
Date: 02/01/2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Why didn't I think of this?!
Oh right, I'm not awesome.
I cried. I'd scream for a sequel but I read the reviews and saw that there was.
You are most likely very awesome. I just kept reading all of these "NuKirk kills Khan and avoids the problem" blogs and thouoght, "Wait a second. he blows up a ship and doesn't get in trouble? Nope."
Glad you liked it.
Date: 01/26/2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh god... there is so much emotion packed into such a short fic. I can't quite keep myself from crying...
I really want to see more of this 'verse. Maybe something where Spock and everyone else realizes their mistake? Maybe another alternate universe, where Kirk didn't fire on the Botany Bay? And either Spock or Kirk ends up dead, and one of the counterparts winds up in the XI verse and tells them what happened? (Just an idea...Don't mind me, lol).
Date: 01/26/2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh! This is sad but beautiful. I just wish Spock (the younger) hadn't divorced him and had believed him. It's so sad! Great job.
Yes, I almost never write somethng sad, but this one just crawled in. I'm glad he has Selik at least.
Date: 01/26/2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
What an incredibly poignant story of loyalty and love. Thanks.
Thanks. I almost never write unhappy endings (there's enough unhappiness in this world), but I've read several comments on various sites about NuKirk destroying the Botnay Bay before Khan can act, and I got to thinking, what if he got in trouble for it? The assumption has always been (at least in the blogs I've read) that he'd just do it, and everything would be fine. Not likely.
Date: 01/26/2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW! See, I never expected all that bad stuff to happen just because Jim didn't want Khan to kill Spock.
Hey, Maybe Selik and Spock could mind meld and get the real info there. Then Spock can grovel and get Jim back.
Always a possibility. I simply wanted to write something about a hard choice.