Reviews For Paradise Lost
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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great men do not become so
Without taking risks, oh
Who have you become now
If you are scared to know how
The very stars know your name
And a Vulcan does the same

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2012 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think this is really good - understated, yet powerful!  Well done.

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Date: 01/12/2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this. I think (for what my lousy opinion is worth) that your non-rhyming verses work better than some fo the rhyming ones.

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