Date: 05/28/2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
A possessive Vulcan warrior driven by scent
Having him near; patience is not lent
Only driving him to take what is his
Refusing to let Jim miss
The unmistakable claim
And to let him do the same
Forevermore only each others
Last and truest lovers
I truly love your poems my dear...thanks so much for reading.
Date: 01/10/2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
The whole feel of it is raw, which is how Spock would feel during this time. Logic stripped away, to the raw emotions underneath.
Many thanks once again for commenting. It truly helps to hear that I can contribute on this site.
Date: 01/10/2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This one has a more chilling feel to it...I like it! You know what I appreciate about this one? I like the fact that I was able to tell from the get-go that this poem was from Spock's POV (I picture Mirror Spock as well). You have a way of getting inside our favorite Vulcan's head and conveying his thoughts without needing to rely on his typical catchphrases or using overly large words, which can be more of a distraction than anything. That to me is a mark of a great poet and of someone who truly has a grasp of the characters :)
You made my day.....I sometimes think it is a fluke dear one...That it won't happen again. That my muse has taken permanent leave. But she surprises me and comes back. Sets down her bag of troubles and helps me find my way.
Date: 01/10/2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like it could be the thoughts of mirror Spock I believe.
You know what Fantasy Gem I believe you are right..I may have to change something in the catergory section..thanks so much for your review..It means so much..