Date: 01/28/2014 10:56 PM Title: The Property of the Victor
I've read dozens of pon farr stories, but this is a new twist; kudos for thinking of something different!
You manage to keep them reasonably in character, given the strange situation in which they find themselves, and I thank you for that. I do wish we'd gotten to witness that "legendary" punishment, though. ;-)
Date: 01/06/2014 10:12 AM Title: The Property of the Victor
Was a bit of everything: There were funny moments, angry, frightening, erotic and romantic.
Your Jim a little more aggressive than I am accustomed to from OU.
"trying to mate with me"
Was excellent - I roll with laughter.
And so even when he realized they did not stop fighting.
Response of bones about doctors and biology of Vulcan was also amusing.