Date: 10/13/2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. You did well in portraying the fact that Spock didn't want to admit that he was hurt, but Jim loved him enough to be able to see it with his own eyes. Poor Jim, not doing anything to incur Spock's wrath (this time) and taking the brunt of his jealousy anyway. The ending was sweet. Great job!
Date: 05/04/2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is the type of fights, that only people really close to each other can have.
One moment you're blindly angry, and the next everything is settled and it was all stupid.
Very sweet, the jealousy from Spock and the silent understanding from Jim.
Gives a nice flavour of their young love, and the closeness too, which spells a promising future ahead. Yaaaay~
Date: 09/01/2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far I have read half of your stories and you have became one of my favorite authors, you say you are new at this and yet it feels like you have been writing your whole life. I love your work please keep them comming!
TYVM. I'll do my best.
Date: 11/24/2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
There's an old song from the 1980's called "Nothing looks the same in the light". It says how we look at things from a different respective the morning after...sometimes for better or worse. This is very much like that. How will they look at the situation the morning after.
Date: 11/23/2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great and cute job!! I can imagine their fight - Kirk the passionate and heated fighter, Spock the calmer but cold one. They so young - it was really astonishing to read! Thanks for it.
Thank you, thank you. Yes, I'd rather fight with Kirk than Spock. I can deal with heat, but Spock would probably drive me to use Kirk's "all-purpose, time-honored rejoinder."
Date: 11/22/2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww. I love this line: “There are few things worse than a chilly, sad Vulcan, and I’m not having one in my quarters. Now get in here.” And I love the very appropriate ending...and the hair comment is just priceless!
I too hope you post more stories :)
Thank you so much. That was also my favorite line. I never want Spock to be chilly or sad. I think it's good for Kirk, ha!