Date: 11/13/2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I realy, realy liked this a lot. My favourite line was '... that his personal bed heater was working Gamma.'
The olfactory sense is the one that can connect us with the strongest and deepest emotions...clever Spock!
Thank you so much. I hate overusing character names during short pieces like this one (or at all, really), hence the “bed heater” line. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/11/2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree wonderful chosen words to describe the love one feels for another.
Thank you so much. Finding the balance between being succinct yet appropriately emotive during this piece was difficult. I’m glad you liked it.