Date: 11/12/2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was good. I like how you led us to believe Jim was clueless when he really wasn't. And my favorite part was the alien that was waiting for the two of them to kiss. That was just cool. Great job, even with the typos. You've made my morning!
Date: 11/06/2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Who cares really with the little typo's this was adorable....so cute and it made me squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee all over the place...ahhhhhhhh....I love it when they kiss....sneaky sneaky first Spock and then Jim...loved it...