[Report This]Date: 10/11/2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter III: The Meaning Of Being Lonely
*shock*
Hope Jim won't die, now that Spock is there...
Greets, WD
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go
Oh my Gosh...
It's like...I don't know...it's so gripping...oO
I'm still not so familiar with the characters - you know that - but your story is so emotional and stirring...overhelming^^
Hope you'll update soon again :)
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter II: Lost
uh oh.. whatever it is, is done with McCoy and the Captain is next!
Thanks for the update and you got the paragraphs separated, which was what I meant in my previous comment. Thank you!
There is a paragraph which seemingly contained a small depiction of a J/Mc relationship and I had to go back and re read before noticing it was truly a J/S within the whole context.
Thanks for updating.
Date: 10/05/2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go
Hey :-)
Just wanted to say: Your story is awesome!
I hope you'll update it soon because else I think I'm gonna burst with curiosity.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go
This is looking very promising! There is something in Jim`s mind, I wager!
Could I trouble you with some re arrangement of the text? It is a bit hard to read as it is.
Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
Erm sure will do if you tell me how you think it wouldbe easier to read I'll try to rearrange it...
I don't have too much experience with it so ... advice is appreciated :D