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Reviewer: WackyDucky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter III: The Meaning Of Being Lonely

*shock*

 

Hope Jim won't die, now that Spock is there...

Greets, WD

Reviewer: WackyDucky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go

Oh my Gosh...

It's like...I don't know...it's so gripping...oO

 

I'm still not so familiar with the characters - you know that - but your story is so emotional and stirring...overhelming^^

 

Hope you'll update soon again :)

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter II: Lost

uh oh.. whatever it is, is done with McCoy and the Captain is next!

Thanks for the update and you got the paragraphs separated, which was what I meant in my previous comment. Thank you!

There is a paragraph which seemingly contained a small depiction of a J/Mc relationship and I had to go back and re read before noticing it was truly a J/S within the whole context.

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: WackyDucky Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go

Hey :-)

 

Just wanted to say: Your story is awesome!

 

I hope you'll update it soon because else I think I'm gonna burst with curiosity.

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter I: Let Go

This is looking very promising! There is something in Jim`s mind, I wager!

Could I trouble you with some re arrangement of the text? It is a bit hard to read as it is.

Thank you for sharing!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Erm sure will do if you tell me how you think it wouldbe easier to read I'll try to rearrange it...
I don't have too much experience with it so ... advice is appreciated :D

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