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Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was lovely!  Very nicely done.


Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's good to see how "let's talk about it" works out between them. Spock's very vulcan version of a romantic declaration is priceless.

Reviewer: Kirkinadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sensual, romantic, well written - in other words, perfect

Reviewer: Crossroads_Wanderer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is an artfully written story. The deep platonic bond that they have before the romantic relationship is mature and beautiful, and you capture the depth of love that is portrayed in the series. Kirk and Spock show a healthy amount of worry for the welfare of each other, while still acting like mature adults. Kirk is portrayed with intelligence and vibrancy and Spock is very much in-character.

I particularly liked Spock's characterization, as you brought his character out of the circumstances we've seen him canonically portrayed in, while still handling his character with dignity. The way Spock has to think and reason about entering a relationship with Kirk is unusual, but so right for his character. There's also a serene quality to him in this story that isn't really present in canon until the later movies. I like that you moved his characterization forward, as I think it is necessary for him to have achieved some level of being comfortable in his own skin in order to be able to engage in a relationship.

In short, I think you have a wonderful grasp on the characters, not only as they are in the series, but as how they can grow and change.

Reviewer: omega111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ah...this was great. Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVED THIS...damn you write so well...the words echoing all around me ....just like them...When I read your words all I hear are the voices of De, Len and them so did an excellent job...of us seeing  Jim being scared....for his first officer...his best friend.....thanks for this....

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