Date: 09/16/2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jim's story is good. The baby gas a nice name.
Will you have any follow up story to this one? I would like to see where the three go from here.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked it! I have some writing that got left out of this piece that I've been meaning to flesh out as a McCoy-centered follow-up of sorts that will probably take place, time-wise, right after this one. ("I've been meaning" is the key part, unfortunately. It's been sitting on my computer for about the past half-year untouched. -__-)