Date: 06/06/2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a little late to the party but I just wanted to say that I love the way you write Kirk and Spock-- I feel that you translate their personalities and mannerisms quite truly. I have such respect for author's that can manage to keep the characters in character, and pre-slash stories are definitely a favorite of mine. Anyways, thank you for the lovely story!
Date: 09/22/2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story. ^_^
I like how Spock automatically counted how many smiles he's seen. :)
"Stomachache that did not hurt at all" - Awesome phrasing!
Aww, poor lonely Spock, avoiding Jim like that. And stupid crewmembers! Xenophobes, both of them. Very good of the Captain to straighten them out.
Awww, they're two parts of a whole
Date: 09/14/2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have a real fondness for "first meeting" stories, especially since the "reboot" is not something even close to my imaginings of nigh upon forty years.
This was beautifully written and executed. It rings through with truth and simplicity and very closely matches what I myself see in a first meeting between them.
Definitely a favorite.
Date: 09/14/2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful writing! Spock poses a unique challenge as a character, because it's not just about his emotional balance, but his social one as well. After all, he's not just the product of two nationalities, he's a child of two species, which has ramifications on both sides of the equation.
You've set up the beginnings of their epic relationship so well, and I'm already looking forward to seeing what else you might have written here.
Date: 09/14/2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh what KrazieKat2009 said...You are so made of win. Every word you type is gold to these human ears....and I see them both so perfectly in my mind it was like watching them live in front of me..........Thank you so much..I am going to read other stories by you......please make more...