Date: 09/07/2015 9:16 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
Such a painful piece. The pain of regret is probably the most difficult of all to deal with
Date: 03/04/2015 6:41 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
Beautiful writing hon, but so sad!!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2012 8:24 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
This is exquisite and so possible, such a skill to convey with a modicum of words all that is needed, thank you
Date: 04/20/2011 9:49 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
aww so sad
Date: 08/23/2010 6:42 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
Sanctioned Sequel to: Look but See by Vampire Wine. (Which is unfortunately not posted on this site, but this can be read with out reading that story.)
Link please? I couldn't find it on Google and I couldn't find an LJ user by that name, so a little help would be appreciated.
Author's Response:
Vampire Wine at present only has an account at fan fiction.net.
Here's the URL for that story:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5843307/1/Look_But_See
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2010 11:42 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
That was so sad. i cried.
Author's Response:
That's perfectly understandable. I cried too when I was writing this.
Date: 08/22/2010 4:06 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me
hello!
This is not a bad story idea, but you need to expand your vocabulary - you used the same words and phrases throughout, and it became a bit tedious to read.
The more you write, the better you get though! Try using a thesaurus next time.
Author's Response:
The repetitive use of specific phrases and/or words was intentional and not necessarily a reflection of my linguistic skills, written or verbal. I purposely chose to utilize the concept of "repetition for emphasis". The other reason I consciously chose to employee certain language patterns was to mimic certain styles of poetic verse or songs like the one used to inspire this story. No thesauruses, dictionaries, or other research tools were needed to create this reply.