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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2015 9:16 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

Such a painful piece. The pain of regret is probably the most difficult of all to deal with

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2015 6:41 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

Beautiful writing hon, but so sad!!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2012 8:24 PM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

This is exquisite and so possible, such a skill to convey with a modicum of words all that is needed, thank you

Reviewer: lobsanglud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2011 9:49 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

aww so sad

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2010 6:42 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

Sanctioned Sequel to: Look but See by Vampire Wine. (Which is unfortunately not posted on this site, but this can be read with out reading that story.)

Link please? I couldn't find it on Google and I couldn't find an LJ user by that name, so a little help would be appreciated.

Author's Response:

Vampire Wine at present only has an account at fan 

Here's the URL for that story:

Reviewer: vitaminH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2010 11:42 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me

That was so sad. i cried.

Author's Response:

That's perfectly understandable.  I cried too when I was writing this.

Reviewer: Barn Bunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2010 4:06 AM Title: The Ghost of You and Me


This is not a bad story idea, but you need to expand your vocabulary - you used the same words and phrases throughout, and it became a bit tedious to read.

The more you write, the better you get though! Try using a thesaurus next time.

Author's Response:

The repetitive use of specific phrases and/or words was intentional and not necessarily a reflection of my linguistic skills, written or verbal. I purposely chose to utilize the concept of "repetition for emphasis". The other reason I consciously chose to employee certain language patterns was to mimic certain styles of poetic verse or songs like the one used to inspire this story.

No thesauruses, dictionaries, or other research tools were needed to create this reply.





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