Date: 09/18/2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
There is a beautiful clarity about your writing, I can't explain what it is exactly, but this story FEELS so right, slim and transparent, it flows easily and caresses the characters while designing them. Very, very enjoyable.
Date: 08/14/2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was so well and beautifully written. Spock and Jim were themselves, even in each other's bodies. I loved how much more Jim came to understand and love Spock by living as him. This was such a unique idea - nothing like realizing you're in love with your dearest friend while inhabiting said friend's body! I also enjoyed how perfectly Spock could imitate Jim - testament to a lot of observation on our favorite science officer's part - but I was surprised Bones didn't realize something was up. The last paragraph really got me. These two truly are meant for each other. All in all, this was gorgeous. Thank you for sharing this with us.