Date: 08/10/2010 8:20 PM Title: Infinite Diversity
This is very sweet. I think this is a successful effort for any story, much less your first. The only thing I will mention is that it seems here that Kirk and Spock are best friends, not former adversaries with a burgeoning friendship like in the movie, and I guess Uhura isn't on the romance scope for Spock. I'm totally OK with that, but you might want to indicate that this "world" differs slightly from the movie at the beginning of the story or put an AU listing at the top. More importantly, I seriously love you forever for successfully using the word "thrice" in this story. I look forward to more from you!