Date: 08/02/2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jim was pretty damn sure Spock was gonna choke a bitch – but he totally didn’t, and that was cool
Didn’t know he would make a joke afterwards, and still look prim and perfect and edible all at the same time
“Fine. But if, and when, I r’member this in the mornin’, I’m jumpin’ the hell outta you.”
Thanks for sharing
Date: 07/29/2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I saw the summary and started not to read this because it sounded too weird, but you totally pulled this off. I'm sitting here now wondering how you made Spock crushing a can against his head so hot. The lessons to me are not to judge a story by the summary and to read everything you post. Thanks for the cute hotness...or maybe the hot cuteness - whichever, thanks!
Date: 07/29/2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was cute!
It makes me wish there was a after fic. Because I think it would be insanely cute and very funny to have Kirk keep his promise. I hope you keep that in mind(:
Ugh, Kirk jumping a possibly unprepared Vulcan!!
Date: 07/29/2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story made me howl with laughter. That image of Spock so calmly and loftily crushing the can against his forehead and just as calmly handing it back to a slack-jawed Jim saying "You may can it" is, like, totally priceless :-D Drunk Jim might not be very captainly, but he sure is fun to watch :-DD And he obviously still retains some mesure of charm. if he was able to seduce Spock anyway - although I suspect Jim's success in getting Spock to kiss him back lies more with already-existing feelings on Spock's part than sudden lust at seeing Jim drunk ;)) By the way, I loved the bit Jim's debating whether a tongue is an extremity or not; that's just the kind of pointless, random musing I do when *I* am drunk :-D Silly but fun and very nicely written.