Date: 10/15/2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Small and brilliant, like a diamond. The scene of violent loss of control stands out in contrast against the determined dedication of the beginning (anything to safe your life) and the calm caring sweetness of the end. As Pon Far stands out as a time of uncontrolled emotions against a life of loyalty, love and service. Well done indeed.
Date: 02/27/2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
>so you want to know What brought me to tears? ok
>Achsaspok degree in very bad at first, then Achharofa said "he dies, Jim"
>When he asked him to leave the other opposed - and he'll do anything to his first officer did not die, how can you not tear such devotion?
>Later that ye hard to watch Spock tortured, my heart went out to him, when he says he might kill Jim .. how hard and sad. >The latter confessed that he loved him anything in the world ... i sub a litel
>Get such an orgasm until loss of consciousness? Wow, you have to offer it to hospitals instead of anesthesia used. I know I was happy to receive such explosive before my surgery lol
Date: 01/01/2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Risking life for someone you love ...this storys always brings me to tears.
I loved spock's final sentence
It was very nice
Author's Response: "Risking life for someone you love" Yes the was the impression I was trying to make. And wow it brings you to tears? I'm amazed and pleased that this moved you so much. Thank you so much for the wonderful review.