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Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow, this is just fascinating

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

omg, omg, omg... Tell me that Winona's gasp was for Jim's wellfare and not the car's!

I have a feeling that something else is going on, here...

Thank you for updating!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for another wonderful chapter...Poor Jim thinking that it was his fault...Damn, doesn't he realize that you can never make a bully like that happy...and he is so small...10 years old, how can he possibly make Frank stop the abuse. He tried to be so polite and do everything he could think so that Frank would let him go to have that tour..but to no avail....like talking to a brick wall..I am so glad that Spock has decided on being his parent..but it will be complicated. Let's say Spock does win and then what...they were very close in another life time..how will that effect Spock when they are under the same roof.  Jim is going to have questions especially when he remembers the last sentence that Pike said...that he was surprised he had made a friend with a Vulcan..that they don't do usually...so why with him...lots of questions..so looking forward to your next chapter...thank you...

Reviewer: JadeMac2442 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

You can't stop there. It's unfair.  What happens next? When will there be more? I never leave reviews like this.  (Mostly because I ususally don't read WIPs, so I can review them coherently.) Where's the rest of it?  I want to read it all, RIGHT NOW. 

Smacks self hard.  Okay, um. Loved the fiction. This is amazing. You've created something really amazing and unique here, and I CAN'T WAIT for you to continue it. Excellent work.  I like that you make Jimmy's  voice sound unique and like Jim, but also...like he's very young, if that makes sense. Please update soon.

 

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

I must say that I am really enjoying this story. What a turmoil of feelings Spock must be going through...thinking about raising the man who was once his lover. Knowing that Nero is still out there wanting revenge. If he gets ustody of Jim, how will his feelings change when Jim grows? And will he ever tell Jim of their relationship in the other universe? Just. Plain. WOW.

Reviewer: estralita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm so glad things are starting to look better.  It was a nice touch, having McCoy learn who Spock is.  I hope things work out! Thanks for the nice chapter :)

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