Date: 09/06/2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really can't express how much I love this story. I just start grinning with silly excitement whenever I see that you've updated it, and I have to drop everything until I've read it. *happy sigh*
Oh Jim, I can't wait to see what shenanigans you get into on the Enterprise. (Because obviously he's going to get to go...or something is very wrong in the universe!)
I can totally see why Jim drove Frank's car off the cliff, thanks to this story. You fold in events from the new movie so nicely.
Spock needs a hug!
Date: 09/06/2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for updating! I also like this chapter very much. I enjoyed Jim's eagerness about the Enterprise and I am glad that they have some outsiders help. Do look forward to see how they will make Frank agree to allow that visit and mmh.. does it have to do something with the rib? oh boy..
Looking forward to the rest!