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Reviewer: kimey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 1:26 AM Title: Back at Frank's

quiero desirte que me encanta tu fic espero que lo continues pronto y espero que entiendas mi mensaje no se nada de ingles a tu fic lo pongo en un traductor es precioso te felicito por tu fic

 

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Reviewer: vitaminH Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 9:17 PM Title: Back at Frank's

poor Spock he is there all by himself and so uncertain

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2010 5:03 AM Title: Back at Frank's

Thank you for updating this story. I am very enthralled in it, and I do think Sam was unnecesary.. I mean, I did bit miss him at all ^^. I think there were a couple of sentences short of a word up there, but do n't mind me too much. I will have to read again to locate.

 

 

Reviewer: logicallyillogical Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 6:51 PM Title: Back at Frank's

Another wonderful chapter! I loved how Spock contemplated kidnapping Kirk -- Spock is being so protective of Jim, and you can see how conflicted he is when he realizes that he still can't find it within him to defy Jim's wishes. *sigh*

And yay for Jim's friends, being the Tom Sawyers to Jim's Huck Finn. Especially Gary, who's trying so hard to determine whether or not Spock is, indeed, a creeper or not.

On a side note, though the scene with Frank was in no way funny, I found the bit about Jim's shirt getting torn quite hysterical. Why is it, in any reality, Jim can't wear a single thing without it getting ripped? :D

Reviewer: estralita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2010 2:20 PM Title: Back at Frank's

Spock touched Jim's face briefly with the slightest of smiles. "Remember," he said.

That made me smile.  So loving and sweet.

Great chapter :)

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