Date: 06/08/2016 12:59 PM Title: Author's Endnote
HOLY SHIT. THAT WAS WAS THE LONGEST STORY/FAN FICTION I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE. I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO FINISH IT BUT I DID. GOD, THIS WAS A GOOD STORY TO KICK OFF MY SUMMER. I WAS JUST CRYING DURING THE SAD PART WITH SPOCK AND KIRK WHEN THEY WERE APART/TORTURED. AND THIS ENDING, I STILL CANT BELIEVE I READ THIS. I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I'M CAPABLE OF READING IT AGAIN. I SUCK AT DESCRIBING THINGS BUT THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A STORY. GOD, I HOPE U AREN'T IRRITATED BY ALL CAPS. ITS JUST HOW I FEEL.
Date: 10/23/2015 12:21 PM Title: 171- Leadership: Nyota
This is an interesting arc and one I had not come across before. I like the way that you explore the maturation of the characters. Also how you have considered the timeline and how tht might change who is in command and how a mission might change or stay the same in a different timeline.
Date: 11/15/2014 7:39 PM Title: Author's Endnote
Thank you. The question 'WHY' has for a long time been one of my favourites, if I may apply this term here (I'm not a native speaker). So, thank you for taking so much effort to express your ideas about this problem.And thank you for the happy ending, too. There's got to be the light shining through the darkness there, somewhere...
Date: 10/27/2012 9:17 PM Title: 1- Introduction: Spock
Thanks for a very thought provoking fic especially the but about khans brother wonder if this is semi prophetic we will have to wait and see next may. Your culturaexplorations are worth going into more deeply. This is a fic to be read through like a novel then explored for literary quality at a later date. Thank you for your hard work and reading pleasure
Date: 02/26/2012 5:02 PM Title: 99- The City on the Edge of Forever: Edith Keeler
I really loved the "City on the Edge of Forever" chapters. You took one of the best TOS episodes and made an even better reboot. Kirk and Spock's growing love for one another is perfectly described here. I can't wait to finish!! :)
Date: 10/10/2010 5:53 AM Title: 27- The Enemy Within: Accord
its taking so long for them to get together.....
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for leaving all the reviews. Just wanted to let you know that they don't get together for a very long time. This story is... somewhat notorious for it.